I get the two guys in the flat. But why are you in it talking to a dog?
You MIGHT be too old to remember ‘This Life’ on BBC2. Currently watching it again. (sad middle aged git watching a 20something series). Might be inspirational. Might be better if you (the girl) lived in the flat. You could do new perspectives on the toilet seat, unwashed dishes, beer cans etc. Only this time it’s the girl who makes the mess!
Well done, might turn into something that you’ll get paid for.